tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post8197264727914330140..comments2023-11-05T05:27:49.392-05:00Comments on The Raisin Chronicles: Friday FictionJeanne Estridgehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13096521122802823385noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-85788903280368023382009-04-05T22:26:00.000-04:002009-04-05T22:26:00.000-04:00Very clever. Very funny. I like this condensed so...Very clever. Very funny. I like this condensed soup-variety short fiction. It is brutally short, but demands an efficiency we should all strive to achieve. <BR/><BR/>I'm so wordy, short fiction is proving my challenge.CDBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693699262370727497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-34629864660918818782009-04-04T23:33:00.000-04:002009-04-04T23:33:00.000-04:00Love the stories!Love the stories!Mary@Holy Mackerelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04026873878364041551noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-6126879566967671102009-04-04T21:17:00.000-04:002009-04-04T21:17:00.000-04:00Flash fiction is so much harder than you'd think i...Flash fiction is so much harder than you'd think it would be. Love your story.Frogs in my formulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15588651443689809504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-35494068732269756442009-04-04T16:42:00.000-04:002009-04-04T16:42:00.000-04:00Perfect. I love the maple syrup of creative writi...Perfect. I love the maple syrup of creative writing too.anymommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17870033179328734404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-49526914157852125932009-04-04T06:34:00.000-04:002009-04-04T06:34:00.000-04:00That was beautiful... a wonderful ending! Encourag...That was beautiful... a wonderful ending! Encourage the gift! Keep writing.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-83664689853926338792009-04-04T03:05:00.000-04:002009-04-04T03:05:00.000-04:00He he he - oh yours is so, so clever. "She brained...He he he - oh yours is so, so clever. "She brained him with a 14 oz. creamed spinach." I want to frame some of your best lines - they make me laugh out loud! And make me want to repeat them if only an opportune moment would come along. Jeanne do you think you are a writer yet? <BR/><BR/>Why don't you do a post where you set the theme and then we have to write our creative pieces in 25 to 50 words. I think it would be fun.Lillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14597193176450931002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-35372049042354556322009-04-04T02:10:00.000-04:002009-04-04T02:10:00.000-04:00All good, I enjoyed them all! Thanks for the giggl...All good, I enjoyed them all! Thanks for the giggles..:)Far Side of Fiftyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995757632158408442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-39965940296280721852009-04-03T22:35:00.000-04:002009-04-03T22:35:00.000-04:00Loved the Flash fiction. It's made for Twitter!Loved the Flash fiction. It's made for Twitter!Sandra Leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12052047359365369942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-77728897565564191962009-04-03T21:57:00.000-04:002009-04-03T21:57:00.000-04:00Back to your violent tendencies I see...Back to your violent tendencies I see...HoodChickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08675041170740517867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-39996137977166234712009-04-03T16:18:00.000-04:002009-04-03T16:18:00.000-04:00fantastic stories! short stories can be so challen...fantastic stories! short stories can be so challenging to write. thanks for sharing some good ones with us.Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03564622747467995825noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-60746117960462342912009-04-03T16:08:00.000-04:002009-04-03T16:08:00.000-04:00great choices!!! I loved the one-liner!!great choices!!! I loved the one-liner!!Roshnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107573625336456428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-80437857584954081082009-04-03T14:55:00.000-04:002009-04-03T14:55:00.000-04:00I've never heard of short-short before. It's abou...I've never heard of short-short before. It's about the length of a blog post - perfect.<BR/><BR/>I loved yours.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-65311521466097286522009-04-03T14:17:00.000-04:002009-04-03T14:17:00.000-04:00Ditto on Buff's comment, I needed that today...Ditto on Buff's comment, I needed that today...Chef Ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-46670854946683888222009-04-03T11:48:00.000-04:002009-04-03T11:48:00.000-04:00Both pretty concise and funny..Both pretty concise and funny..buffalodickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00663035745368682736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-87349609119256569642009-04-03T11:29:00.000-04:002009-04-03T11:29:00.000-04:00Ha! Great job!Ha! Great job!Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14699674732274478502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-2315289130806318592009-04-03T11:09:00.000-04:002009-04-03T11:09:00.000-04:00I lost my imagination a few years back, thank GAWD...I lost my imagination a few years back, thank GAWD, I now have yours!!! Love the stories... I had a friend who "brained" her husband, with a cast iron skillet. I still haven't decided if that was courage or insanityCyndi and Stumpyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15945219976457829612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-77665954170050077262009-04-03T10:41:00.000-04:002009-04-03T10:41:00.000-04:00Very funny stuff! She brained him. That made me la...Very funny stuff! She brained him. That made me laugh out loud.Michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10797131548275372465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-43066951301279283972009-04-03T10:06:00.000-04:002009-04-03T10:06:00.000-04:00One day we're in Grade School, and the next we par...One day we're in Grade School, and the next we participate in murder!<BR/><BR/>I'm ascared about what else might be lurking in this author's wicked little mind.<BR/><BR/>Something brilliant, I'm sure!Steven Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09609837368984628002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-80399951602931406382009-04-03T09:54:00.000-04:002009-04-03T09:54:00.000-04:00Fantastic and humerous short story. I wish I was g...Fantastic and humerous short story. I wish I was gifted in writing. But, Hey I can post the heck out of pictures. Have a great day.darsdenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06204592599045715814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-74881291303746320202009-04-03T07:49:00.000-04:002009-04-03T07:49:00.000-04:00I absolutely adore the religion, sex, and mystery ...I absolutely adore the religion, sex, and mystery one. . . <BR/><BR/>Now. . . if we add politics to it, there would be something about a cover up!!!Liz Wilkey (a.k.a. A Mom on Spin)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14804873736204504475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-33189409292097993752009-04-03T07:43:00.000-04:002009-04-03T07:43:00.000-04:00These are clever and good. I love your story at th...These are clever and good. I love your story at the end!Lorihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04441204804740501624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-11153629705003908552009-04-03T07:39:00.000-04:002009-04-03T07:39:00.000-04:00Oo - the maple syrup of creative writing - I like ...Oo - the maple syrup of creative writing - I like that one. Shame I can barely keep my comments to that length!!! (Brevity is NOT my strong point - but perhaps something I can aspire to at some point in the future!)<BR/>Love your story - excellent!Kabbalah Rookiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12737692859267786264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-25737201164341118032009-04-03T07:18:00.000-04:002009-04-03T07:18:00.000-04:00Love your story!! Superb writing!! :)Love your story!! Superb writing!! :)Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17742460742458933705noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4496267973912420638.post-34264096887589484172009-04-03T05:53:00.000-04:002009-04-03T05:53:00.000-04:00Oh - I love your story and the confessional one to...Oh - I love your story and the confessional one too. Short and oh so bitter sweet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com